Thursday, February 27, 2014

"The Ultimate Enemies"



7 comments:

  1. I'm curious...does 'harzam' mean onomatopoeia or were you saying that the word 'harzam' is an example of onomatopoeia?

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  2. It is an example.

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  3. I like your story. It reminds me of the ancient battles in Rome.

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  4. Nice poem. I like your nonsense words and I think the picture really describes the poem. Great job.

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  6. I commented on Amelia, Steven, and Gianna.

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  7. Nice blog. What made you think of writing about this? I like your use of onomatopoeia, it is very creative. I also like how you don't say who will win, you leave the reader hanging.

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